My Favorite Elaborated Sentences

Boring Sentence: The detective found clues to solve the mystery.

My New Sentence: The smart,tiny detective found some suspicious clues to solve the scary mystery about the missing coins.

 

Boring Sentence: The monster sat and read a book.

My New Sentence:The three headed, big eared, scary monster sat quietly and read an interesting book about cheeseburgers and a yellow baby fish.

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